I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 27 March 2019
Friday, 15 March 2019
Star Wars Review
Star Wars is great trilogy of films, that has great characters, and plot points, the actors in these films are just phenomenal, like i mean there facial expression were nailed down to a point.
The films and plot were so well directed, that you completely forget that you were even watching a movie. The movies look and seem like they are in the future, but in reality its based a long long time ago, in a galaxy far far away.
Monday, 4 March 2019
Poem's
Poem's
These are mini poem's about, the kitchen, the beach, my bedroom, and a special place to me, mine is Otaki. there are also 2 subject we have to right these poem's about and they are taste, feel, smell, see, and hear.
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My Bedroom
My mouth can feel a taste of damp, and mugy air in my bedroom.
I can see a bed unmade and dirty clothing on the floor.
I can smell the fresh grass from outside my window.
I can hear birds singing, and the breeze of wind, outside.
I feel my bed.
The Kitchen
My mouth has a watering sensation in this place.
My eye's start to water well i start to chop the onions on the chopping board.
My nose can detect a wonderful smell, coming from this heavenly place.
I can feel the heat coming from the oven.
I can hear the mince sizzling on the pan.
I can see the steam rising from the pot, of spaghetti.
The Beach
I can feel the soft sand, sweeping across my feet.
I can taste the fish, in my mouth.
I can smell the seaweed wiggling under the water.
I can see the waves crashing on to shore.
I can hear the wind forming the wild, and crazy, wave's.
Otaki
I feel the water splash on my body, as i do bomb's, and back slap, at the pots
I can taste fish and chips.
I can smell the beautiful flowers.
I can hear the surfers catching the waves, at the beach.
I can see the tree's outside of my house.
Na Haki.
04/03/19
These are mini poem's about, the kitchen, the beach, my bedroom, and a special place to me, mine is Otaki. there are also 2 subject we have to right these poem's about and they are taste, feel, smell, see, and hear.
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My Bedroom
My mouth can feel a taste of damp, and mugy air in my bedroom.
I can see a bed unmade and dirty clothing on the floor.
I can smell the fresh grass from outside my window.
I can hear birds singing, and the breeze of wind, outside.
I feel my bed.
The Kitchen
My mouth has a watering sensation in this place.
My eye's start to water well i start to chop the onions on the chopping board.
My nose can detect a wonderful smell, coming from this heavenly place.
I can feel the heat coming from the oven.
I can hear the mince sizzling on the pan.
I can see the steam rising from the pot, of spaghetti.
The Beach
I can feel the soft sand, sweeping across my feet.
I can taste the fish, in my mouth.
I can smell the seaweed wiggling under the water.
I can see the waves crashing on to shore.
I can hear the wind forming the wild, and crazy, wave's.
Otaki
I feel the water splash on my body, as i do bomb's, and back slap, at the pots
I can taste fish and chips.
I can smell the beautiful flowers.
I can hear the surfers catching the waves, at the beach.
I can see the tree's outside of my house.
Na Haki.
04/03/19
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