I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 5 July 2019
Narrative Animation
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Kia ora Haki,
ReplyDeleteSuch a great animation! I love the different backgrounds you used for the different locations, they worked really well. Next time, you could slow down your reading a bit, at the beginning you were speaking very quickly! I'd love to hear what happens next in the story, do they go back to Earth or do they stay on the new planet?
Vicki
Kia Ora Vicki thank you for this feedback i really appreciate that you like my animation.
DeleteKia ora. I am Keelan from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that the way you thought of this idea it look amazing probably better than my one.
I noticed that you used a great example and it was quite funny.
Maybe you could make the animation faster than it was.
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Keelan
Kia Ora Keelan thank you for your positive feedback on my animation thank you
DeleteKia ora. I am Latrell from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really like your story but you spoke way to fast. Think about slowing it down please so my brain can comprehend the story.
On the other hand your story was well written and I like how it was very simple but effective.
Great I like how you explain the story right off the bat giving the reader some backstory.
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Latrell
Kia Ora Latrell thanks for your positive comment on this animation thank you
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