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Friday, 5 July 2019

Narrative Animation

In Homeroom we have been doing narrative writing and we had to make our own animations of our narratives. We first started of with a narrative planner, and then moved on to a narrative story. And from that story we made an animation, then we later read our story while our animation would play to make this video, I hope you enjoy.  We used google slides to make the animation and screencastify to do the voice over recording. I learnt the importance of timing when recording.

6 comments:

  1. Kia ora Haki,

    Such a great animation! I love the different backgrounds you used for the different locations, they worked really well. Next time, you could slow down your reading a bit, at the beginning you were speaking very quickly! I'd love to hear what happens next in the story, do they go back to Earth or do they stay on the new planet?

    Vicki

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    1. Kia Ora Vicki thank you for this feedback i really appreciate that you like my animation.

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  2. Kia ora. I am Keelan from Gisborne Intermediate School.
    I really liked that the way you thought of this idea it look amazing probably better than my one.
    I noticed that you used a great example and it was quite funny.
    Maybe you could make the animation faster than it was.
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Keelan

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    1. Kia Ora Keelan thank you for your positive feedback on my animation thank you

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  3. Kia ora. I am Latrell from Gisborne Intermediate School.
    I really like your story but you spoke way to fast. Think about slowing it down please so my brain can comprehend the story.
    On the other hand your story was well written and I like how it was very simple but effective.
    Great I like how you explain the story right off the bat giving the reader some backstory.
    here

    Mā te wā
    Latrell

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  4. Kia Ora Latrell thanks for your positive comment on this animation thank you

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