I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 26 July 2019
15 minute writing
It was a dark and gloomy night, in the middle of a forest stood a crooked and unbalanced cabin, that look as could topple over any second. This cabin was by the creek, the was a man that all the children made fun of so he moved the woods, and that's the reasoning for his location, this man was nameless and was known to the people as man Garry. Garry didn’t have any electricity except his car, so Garry lights up his home with candles and a fireplace to keep himself warm. Garry had a boat that he made out of a tree stump that had been used to build the cabin. He likes to go fishing in the creek on his boat with a fishing rod that he forged out of stick, and a thread of string made from Harakeke, with the addition of a sharp rock to use as a hook. The man died in peace at the age of 83.
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wow....how did he die though.... Sounds like hes from exorcist. Its good that he died in peace though. Good story you could make it make a bit more sense because there are some grammar issues.
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