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Monday, 4 March 2019

Poem's

Poem's

These are mini poem's about, the kitchen, the beach, my bedroom, and a special place to me, mine is Otaki. there are also 2 subject we have to right these poem's about and they are taste, feel, smell, see, and hear.
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My Bedroom

My mouth can feel a taste of damp, and mugy air in my bedroom.

I can see a bed unmade and dirty clothing on the floor.

I can smell the fresh grass from outside my window.

I can hear birds singing, and the breeze of wind, outside.

I feel my bed.
       

The Kitchen

My mouth has a watering sensation in this place.

My eye's start to water well i start to chop the onions on the chopping board.

My nose can detect a wonderful smell, coming from this heavenly place.

I can feel the heat coming from the oven.

I can hear the mince sizzling on the pan.

I can see the steam rising from the pot, of spaghetti.


The Beach
I can feel the soft sand, sweeping across my feet.

I can taste the fish, in my mouth.

I can smell the seaweed wiggling under the water.

I can see the waves crashing on to shore.

I can hear the wind forming the wild, and crazy, wave's.


Otaki

I feel the water splash on my body, as i do bomb's, and back slap, at the pots

I can taste fish and chips.

I can smell the beautiful flowers.

I can hear the surfers catching the waves, at the beach.

I can see the tree's outside of my house.



Na Haki.
04/03/19




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