The ThingFoot after foot running for my life, from…..from this thing! How did this happen is probably the main question you are thinking right now, well strap in cause this stuff gets deep. I was living my normal life, normal work, i was a plumber that helped drain the sewers, i used to climb down and drain out all the water that hadn't been drained yet.
I went down one day punting the water pipes in and riding the sewer of water i took corners getting rid of this disgusting water, i had gotten used to the smell down here but something did not smell right, it was the smell of rotting meat. I turned the corner to see a pitch black creature with glowing white eyes, i didn’t seem still it resembles more like smoke? I was not sure, but whatever it was i was scared of it.
I ran ran faster then i ever had before, corner after, i saw the ladder leading up to surface i looked behind me to see the glowing white eyes of this creature haunting from behind, i ran even faster to the ladder i leapt up on to the 8th handle of the ladder and scattered up to the surface. I have told this to all my family friends and co workers none of them believed me, but i knew i saw that something live in deeps down there in the sewers.
Kia ora. I am Keelan from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way that you write that about being a plumber and like the thing was a kind of a monster
I learnt a little bit about your writing and enjoyed it
But maybe you could add some details about The Thing and more excitement to your story
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thank you for your your feedback and support on my story Keelan. I agree with you about adding more excitement because I only had 15 minutes to write this story.
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