I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 10 May 2019
The White Peacock
Deeply, in the planes of china, the sheung wan tree stands tall with a beautiful white peacock resting calmly, itself on one of the long branches on the beautiful tree. Oddly, this this bird is an outcast, she always has been, since the day she was born. She hides among the trees so no one will ever find her, she's ashamed of herself, because she has no beautiful colours like all the other birds
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